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[The Pillsbury Poke]

fair to decent

First off...the sound could be better, and work at the animation and drawings. those are minor things, cause regardless...the joke is there and was funny. I think this was a good first flash.

Also..I agree with fellow reviewers...the Doughboy can't bleed, since he is after all, dough. But work with that knowlege. say the kid went to poke him to, and accidently does something to him, that could be baking related...like getting knocked into the oven (show the end scene as a baked up doughboy, or getting knocked over and getting done in by falling rolling pin and/or cokkie cutters.

Just some ideas. when you got a situation...look at that you are working with, and work with those elements. Adding blood may seem a common trend on here...but you don't want to insult the intelligence of your audience. You had enough smarts to present a funny joke...go with that. think outside the box, or at least bend the borders of the box, and not go by what others say you have to do to make a good flash (blood, gore, sex and violence) You could try to revamp this one and try another ending (perhaps have this ending as an alternate ending...like a feature shown in DVD movies.)

All in all...good job!

CaliginousChild responds:

Thank you. Perhaps once I get better with flash I will remake this. I was thinking about maybe having him fall into yeast or something like the oven.

[Coffee Short-Film]

heh

Neat flash...good work. Coffee sucks ;) heh

Data-Burn responds:

Thank you very much!

[Plum is Canadian!]

I always loved that song :)

I was thinking of making a flash with that song for some time, but I see a fellow Canadian beat me to the punch. :) May still make it...just gotta get it organized.

I just love that song :)

Numbfinger responds:

Actually I am not Canadian, however Plum is! Weeeeeeee!

[Done in Sixty Minutes]

Shiggy shiggy sweet!

wicked flash, and I agree....most of these crap flashes are just sad quickly made flashes. Hell, I could do better then those in a short time frame (just haven't got to making one I feel worthy of putting up) I should try that 60 min challenge.

Great job.

MurcurySword responds:

"Wicked flash"? If there was an on-line term for blushing I'd put it *here*.

[(2003)The Knox]

Cheeese!

Good...my cheese will be safe....no one takes my chedder or havarti. Hmm...though...I don't think the Knox has to worry about predators...it's act of "defending" itself would do it in itself. :)

Knox responds:

so you actualy learned something fro mthis flash,awesome!

[SPACE CATZ 4567]

weird man...just weird :)

I dunno what to even start....but you got that song out...i got some people i wanna bug the hell out of :D

TheMeEvan responds:

Kool, glad to see you got the eye of greatness is ya